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John,
I'd be happy to report my observations when I get a chance.
Perhaps sometime this weekend. As for the reciprocation. I do not have a
web site. No worries though I'm happy to help.
Best,
Greg Newell
At 11:51 AM 4/11/2003, you wrote:
>Greg,
>Thanks for taking the time to visit the site and your kind words. I would
>like to know more specific information about the mistakes in the text. If
>you have time, would you write this up for me? Please send it directly to
>me as not to burden the list with this topic. Spelling and sentence
>structure have never been my strong points. I was rather hasty in
>preparing the text and I didn't have the usual help from an experienced
>editor that I have had when writing a Journal article for example. If you
>do this for me I would be glad to visit your web site and give you advice
>on the lay-out and graphic design.
>
>John Hartman RPT
>
>John Hartman Pianos
[link redacted at request of site owner - Jul 25, 2015]
>Rebuilding Steinway and Mason & Hamlin
>Grand Pianos Since 1979
>
>Piano Technicians Journal
>Journal Illustrator/Contributing Editor
>
>Greg Newell wrote:
> > John,
> > I just read through your web site. While I found it to be a very
> > well thought out and beautifully implemented site I think you might be
> > surprised at a number of mis-spellings and sentence structure problems.
> > While the incidents aren't exactly rampant throughout they are
> > noticeable in spots. I bring this up only that it may help in putting
> > your best foot forward for the customer who is lucky enough to see it.
> >
> > Respectfully,
> > Greg Newell
> >
>
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Greg Newell
mailto:gnewell@ameritech.net
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